Crows MS series

I kinda liked the story line at the beginning but once I saw the animations it really dissapointed me. The walking moves are strange (every time an character starts walking he's doing a moonwalk?) and your fighting scenes aren't really that exciting. You also might want to use some more sound effects and more songs in 1 episode.

Im Very sorry this was my first time animating i will do better in the future
ty for ur opinoin

p.s if u have any idea reagarding my animating, plot, charaters, or anything plz rply

also i figured out wat was causing my "moon walk" problem i will do my best to fix it

Nice storyline,

That song just annoys me, though. My sister is always singing it to piss me off. Other than that, seems like you put a lot of effort into this. Good job.

Best regards,
MushBear ♪

srry that ur sisters singing that song but i love all the songs in my vids

Well, I hope I don't come off as a rude, I just want to offer some constructive criticism. I apologize, if I do. Anyway;


The beginning conversation is pretty weird. It's pretty much like; "Hey, go kidnap someone who has the power to destroy/save the world! You get paid two-hundred dollars now, and eight-hundred upon completion!" His reply; "Oh, that's not strange at all! Sure thing...!"

Firstly, make his reaction a bit more realistic. I mean, honestly, he's not even a little curious or doubtful, and that kind of message is pretty hardcore. And, to win the heart of a seemingly beautiful girl whom can either destroy or save the world....he gets paid one thousand dollars in total? That's just absurd.

Also, the walking animation is slow as f#$ck. I mean, okay, he can't run and have it be called walking, but it takes him an hour to get from one spot to another.

Also, this is just a personal preference, but I don't like the music much. Not to mention that when he is walking outside of the house, the music gets louder. Doesn't that, I don't know- wild guess here, ruin the whole introspective/contemplating aspect? Or, that's what it seemed like he was doing.

...Why...is he sleeping on a windowsill?

im not offended @ all like i said be4 i will fix everything i plan on re-doing alll the videos

thank u for ur opinin im glad u commented cuz now i know what i have 2 fix

p.s he is sleeping on the window sill cuz there was not another bed if u dont like o well

CrowLeaf wrote:im not offended @ all like i said be4 i will fix everything i plan on re-doing alll the videos

thank u for ur opinin im glad u commented cuz now i know what i have 2 fix

p.s he is sleeping on the window sill cuz there was not another bed if u dont like o well

Then make him sleep on a bench, that would show more of his poor-ness.

lol